
Series: Golden State Treasure #1
Published by Bethany House Publishers on February 4, 2025
Genres: Historical Romance
Pages: 304
Format: eARC
Source: NetGalley
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In a land of gold and grit, can two hearts uncover the true treasure?
In 1875 California, Brody MacKenzie arrives at the Two Harts Ranch on a mission to find his runaway brothers, worried they may have fallen into harm. Instead, he discovers them thriving at the ranch's school and orphanage under the care of Ellie Hart, a woman with a heart as resilient as the land she calls home. His options limited, Brody reluctantly takes on the role of ranch doctor, and he forms an unexpected bond with Ellie, who's kept a steady eye on Brody's two rapscallion brothers. When the boys show him a mysterious journal that has been guiding their travels and may hold the key to a lost treasure, Brody and Ellie are captivated by the possibility of a thrilling adventure.
With winter approaching and his brothers threatening to bolt again, Brody and Ellie race against time to decipher cryptic clues and unearth the hidden fortune. But along the way, old adversaries resurface, threatening their newfound affection and the safety of those at the ranch.
Runaway brothers, a treasure map, fortune hunters, reunited family, and a gentle romance in exciting post-Gold Rush California. Mary Connealy is settled in and writing strong frontier era slow-burn romance with inspirational themes and I’m there for it.
Whispers of Fortune is the series opener of the Golden State Treasure series with a tie-in with a previous series, The Lumber Baron’s Daughters. I hadn’t dipped into that series yet, but had no trouble starting in on this series though I will be getting back to that trilogy.
Whispers of Fortune opens on a funny, awkward meet-cute when a woman answers the pounding on the ranch house door nearly getting punched by the hand pounding and then letting her big, gruff brother assume the young Dr. Mackenzie looking for his runaway brothers had attacked her. From there, they sort out the misunderstanding on both sides to help the Mackenzie brothers sort out their family situation and whether to go for the treasure.
I loved that Brody Mackenzie is a new doctor and there were scenes with him and Ellie Hart working together to help his patients from Ellie’s family’s ranch and the orphanage school and training center they run there.
Whispers of Fortune focused on Brody’s family history and situation, and Ellie’s backstory and current situation as she gets over a bad romance experience. Also, there was also a few other narratives happening even with the villains. A couple of these other threads didn’t entirely tie up at the end, but no surprise since this is only the first book in the series. However, with extra plot threads and narrators establishing the series world, there was a disjointed feeling to this story and the romance got a little short-shifted as a result.
I loved this historical setting of the California ranch post-Gold Rush and the beautiful mountains where the hunt for treasure happened. The treasure was tied in with early Spanish California exploration and history which was really neat. I’m eager to see where the series goes and enjoyed the hint that maybe big Josh Hart, the sailor turned rancher and the one-time orphaned orphan helper are going to get their story next. Something tells me there is more to come about the Cabrillo treasure and I’m looking forward to it.
In the end, it was a satisfying start to a series with favorite buzz elements of ‘treasure hunt’ and ‘California history’ for me. The inspirational theme of true treasure vs. greed was the driving piece to a plot featuring family healing, finding yourself, and sweet romance. Recommend to Historical Romance and Inspirational Romance fans.
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It sounds like this is set in my neck of the woods! I have a library audio and hopefully I can get to it before it expires! Glad to see you enjoyed it, Sophia!
Yes, its a beautiful Northern California mountain setting and has scenes in Sacto and SF. Hopefully you’ll beat the expiration,Rachel. 🙂
I grew up in California so I always like reading of its history. This sounds like a good one.
It appealed to me for the same reason, Mary. 🙂
Ooooooooooooooooooooooo! I’m liking the cover and the summary sounds interesting! Thanks for sharing.
Yes, it piqued my interest for several reasons, too.
Love the setting.
Oh yeah, it was an unspoken main character.
I’ve only read a few early-American historical romances (Miss Bev). This one sounds pretty good. Thanks,
I don’t read as many American ones as English and, yay, for Miss Bev’s. 🙂 I’ve enjoyed Mary Connealy’s western ones that I’ve picked up so far.
I like the cover for this one! Glad you enjoyed it and that hopefully you’ll want to read on in the series as it goes. Great review!
Yeah, its spot on for the young doctor new from the east hero. 🙂